Wednesday, November 19, 2008
Chapter One: The Vision
As I look out my window I see the leaves changing to a bright yellow, dashing orange, and a weird colored brown. Although, it's still a horrible day because there's notten' much to do but look out the window listening to my dad scream at my mom for a fight that their having about who knows what, and my six year old baby sister Gabbi, cry because she has the flu with a high temperature. Every ten minutes I have to walk in to her room and give her a cold, refreshing, washcloth to cool her down. Speaking of which I have to go in there right now. When I walk into her room, I look into her bed, but she wasn't there. My first impression was that she would be in the kitchen getting a snack. I slowly pass the living room, were my mom and dad were having their fight. I sneak past the dining room and into the kitchen. She wasn't there either. That's when I start to panic.
I ran into the living room and screamed, "Gabbi's missing!" My dad turns around, he has a red flaring mad expression on his face, and smacks me clear across the room. He yells not listening to what I had just said , "Leave us alone can't you see I'm busy here!" Tears slowly start to stroke down my face.
So about Gabbi, I have a couple choices I could call the police and file a report or I could take this upon myself to find her. I really should call the police but for once I would like to do something right! Suddenly, there was fog at the ankle of my feet. It started to rise to my hips then to my shoulders. I started to freak out this was scary!!! Then I saw a figure of a boy that looks like me walking up to a body that lay upon the ground. The boy fell on his knees bursting into tears. I walk toward the figures and I tried to touch the boy. But then everything vanished!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
HUBBYMAN (GRANDPA)
Just Kidding! I love your story baby, I can't wait to read the second chapter.
I've been working a lot and I didn't get a chance to check out your blog. I'm sure glad I did!
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